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ENTRY 10: Essay (to hand in)

ESSAY BY COMPARISON or CONTRAST (you compare SIMILARITIES, you contrast DIFFERENCES). 

Whether you include a balance between/among similarities or differences >>> this should be present in the thesis statement (be careful with LINKERS).

The similarities and/or differences can be in EVERY body paragraph, OR you may include (for example):

- Similarities in body paragraphs 1 & 2

- Differences in body paragraph 3.

Title: NOUN PHRASE that summarises contents ("Refugees", "Migrants in Europe" and the like, DO NOT seem appropriate  titles!)

Paragr 1: INTODUCTORY PARAGRAPH (last sentence: THESIS STATEMENT)

Paragr 2: TOPIC SENTENCE 1 (related to Thesis statement) + supporting material.

Paragr 3: TOPIC SENTENCE 2 (related to Thesis statement) + supporting material.

Paragr 4: TOPIC SENTENCE 3 (related to Thesis statement) + supporting material.

Paragr 5: CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH (TS 1, 2 & 3 >>> NO Topic sentence!!)


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